In this scene the peach is grown to full size, and the aunts have decided to charge public to come and see it. (This reinforces their wicked nature to the children, as sharing is important to (most) children.)
We added a little narration to the beginning of this scene as the original script seemed to jump without any explanation to the next scene. My line:
"Quickly, Aunt Sponge and Aunt Spiker called in carpenters and had them build a strong fence around the peach."
As in the original script there was only one narrator, who possibly was off stage, we had particular trouble deciding how each narrator would exit or what they would do. We decided to use the narrators to come into and out of the scene
I then change to a crowd member who runs up onto the stairs and pretends to be pushing towards the peach. I take the line of "crowd member" as we don't have this cast. I then exit with Jack P off upstage right through the stage door.
Ongoing targets!
- To bring energy to the crowd member
- To remember to bring on the camera and the money by working out where it is off stage before going on
- To wait for the fence to appear on the projection before continuing my narration
- Continue to project my voice not strain it by using the diaphragm to breathe properly
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